miércoles, 5 de agosto de 2009

Composition about my best friend.

Everybody has a best friend, and i'm not the exception; the mine one, luis angel, lives near my house, i met him three years ago, i think he is really a loyal and funny person, he is always telling and making jokes, sometimes a think he is so crazy! we are a little diferents, he is very outgoing and i'm not so much like him, we both like sports and we are very competitive, he loves playing football and i love skating. we have passed too much good times, but as evertything we have had a little problems, but luckyly we have known resolve them. i hope to have a good friend like him for all the life.

5 comentarios:

  1. Hi Juan! Great Composition!
    But I think you have some errors, like the uppercase

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  2. hi juan, good job
    but I think you made a mistake when you wrote: sometimes a think he is so crazy! put it right

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  3. JUAN, WHEN YOU SAY "EVERTYTHING", WHAT DO YOU MEAN?, AND I TELL YOU THAT WHEN A PERSON WANT TO RESOLVE A SOCIAL PROBLEM YOU CAN USE "RESOLVE" OR "SOLVE" NOT "FIX", THIS WORD IS USED FOR TO MACHINES.

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  4. hi juan...
    good job but you made some mistake...
    but it´s a good job!!

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  5. HI Juanito, your job is pretty cool, but I think that when you have to use both, you should use it with the real subjet, for example..WE both..
    byee!!!

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